Movie Opener Final Draft
Robbery - Final Draft
What did we change?
- I added "24 hours earlier..." once the robbery had started because the peer edits revealed to me that people were confused why the shot of the plane was at the beginning of the film and not the end.
- I changed the background of "An SSKC Film" because the plain black background did not look good enough to me.
- I added text when Kelsey's identity changed for clarification of what was going on because most people were confused about that part.
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